Tuesday, June 23

in a crowd at a concert

I stand so close that I feel intimate with the strangers that dance near me brushing up against me

there is no space here
I hear you moving closer

forget about me

I am made of disrespect
towards people I don't know
forget about this little pain
so close that it's clothes touch yours

I promise you
I will not forget what it smell like
to be so close to you

2 comments:

  1. Instret way to remember
    by smelling the smell
    in a crowded concer
    while you are trying to
    get a little closer

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  2. i wrote this on my cell phone while at the show. i edited the second part a little bit.

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