Enough things stay closed
when I tried to get on
line
a text box
popped up
host refused connection
try again later
when I tried again
it repeated
I was at ease
while I was
used to this
feeling
that drives the car
late at night
to see the city empty
unconditionally
accepting
while the grey bird
touches the pizza
place’s awning
you are somewhere sleeping
and I jingle toward the lock
Wednesday, August 19
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damn dude. i just started reading your blog. these poems are fucking great.
ReplyDeleteIndeed, these poems are great.
ReplyDeleteVery nice, i like it. But it shows the dog was distracting you, the sentence jump from one thing to another, it is intersting to see brain work(just being ironic, I liked the poem for real).
ReplyDeletetake care